增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2）只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Good teachers are like candles that gives warmth and light to students.

Miss Wang is one of the good teacher of mine. I can still remember that cold morning when I was walking to school alone as usually. A motorbike knocked me down and race off. I was left on the icy ground, cried loudly. It was Miss Wang who sent me to nearest hospital. Besides, she went to the hospital to help me with the missing lessons every day. The moment when I think of it, I'll feel warm. But I'd like to be a good teacher like him in the future.

Dear Dr. Snow,

I'm an eighteen-year-old student and I'm just beginning my first year at college. I graduated from high school, but my grades were not great. All through high school, I had trouble getting up in the morning to get to school on time. I couldn't concentrate in class during the day. My parents tried to force me to sleep for 10 hours every night, but I just couldn't. Now I am worried that I won't be able to succeed in school. I still have trouble staying awake during the day.

At night I feel completely awake so I decided on an approach to getting my work done. I go on the Internet, and I spend hours online. I had a few teachers who put up their class notes online so that I could go over the information I didn't get during the day. I could continue to do this but I feel that it's not normal to be so tired during the day. I didn't have much of a social life with other students when I was in high school. I would like to make friends with people in college. I would like to feel more awake during the day. What should I do?

Yours,

Jonathan

Dear Jonathan,

It might be that your sleep and wake cycles are the opposite of most people's cycles. Most people feel awake in the day and tired at night. You should make an appointment to see your doctor. Ask your doctor to refer you to a specialist who can test you and find out if you have a sleep disorder that makes it difficult to sleep at night. When you know the test results, then together with your doctor and family, you can make some plans to change your sleep cycle.

Yours,

Snow

Once there was a young girl named Eliza. She was the daughter of a king and she was very lazy. She1 had her servants do everything for her.

"I am very thirsty, and my2 is on the table. Please get it for me," she called. 3 a servant picked the glass up from the 4 next to Eliza and held it up to her 5 until Eliza was no longer 6. The next day, Eliza was walking to dinner when her hat 7. She called for a servant and a young man ran over, picked up the hat, 8 it off, and placed it back on Eliza's head.

She continually9 her servants to do simple tasks for her. Her father noticed her 10 and decided to punish her. He set her in a 11 with only a loom (织布机) and some thread. No 12 were allowed in the room.

"You will13 in this room, not eating or drinking until you have woven a blanket for me. You have to do all of the work by 14." The king left Eliza all alone in the room.

Eliza called for her servants, 15 none appeared. Then she 16 her father telling her about Athena, the goddess of wisdom. She called for Athena over and over until finally, she fell17.

While she was sleeping, she had a 18. Hermes spoke to her in her dream. He said, "Athena has heard your plea (请求) for 19. She is very angry with you. She will come to you and inform you of your 20." Eliza awoke very frightened.